Something I can't cure myself of
Tagging dialogue when the action would do the job. For example, in new short story:
‘See? Something is interfering with it,’ said Da, taking the lamp down the steps.When
‘See? Something is interfering with it.’ Da took the lamp down the steps.would work just fine. Somehow I never see myself doing this redundant thing until I reread the draft.
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